*I just posted this as a comment to the vegetable rap post, but I realized that people might miss that I commented so I am making it a post.*
Okay so your flow is tight, but are the kids going to be scared by the angry carrot? I know if I found an aggressive talking carrot I would probably run away. Also, if the kids are rolling up phillies they might have a bigger problem than poor diet.
Seriously though. I think a good way to have your vegetable dreams answered, is to make a story board for this video, and also another one that is a little bit more serious that can be focused on a larger audience. Two narratives = better than one = better grade.
What does everyone think about making two story boards?